Arctic Monkeys - Fluorescent Adolescent pitch from TomConstable2
We took some feedback from teachers and classmates and came to the conclusion that we needed to do some rethinking about our idea. We kept a similar concept but developed the idea to have a more clear narrative. We have added a more developed introduction, so that it looks as if our older character is reminiscing about his youth, and then it shows what his youth was like. We didn't have this idea before and now it looks much more clear. This audience feedback was very useful to us and is something that we will be looking to get more of throughout our project.
We took some feedback from teachers and classmates and came to the conclusion that we needed to do some rethinking about our idea. We kept a similar concept but developed the idea to have a more clear narrative. We have added a more developed introduction, so that it looks as if our older character is reminiscing about his youth, and then it shows what his youth was like. We didn't have this idea before and now it looks much more clear. This audience feedback was very useful to us and is something that we will be looking to get more of throughout our project.
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